Well this is fantastic. We are changing our whole script now. Why we changed it was more of a personal decision made by the one and only Robert. He wanted this change because it made more sense of the story and plot for the opening. Also Robert has his family now helping out this film which is a positive.
Now the film starts at Robert's house where he is celebrating his birthday. He will get these dog tags from the birthday. He also receives a Jaguar for his birthday because why not. This is to show that he is wealthy and not necessarily normal. While he is driving around in his new Jaguar, the radio plays and that is when the news breaks out about a war. That's when he finds out about what is happening in this world. That's how we introduce the plot.
In the next scene he goes to the mailbox to get his birthday cards. In the mailbox is where we will put a unique letter in there( the draft notice) and he brings it back to the house. While he opens the birthday cards he returns back to the unique card. Once he opens it and then reads the card he finds out he gets drafted to the military. That's when the opening ends.
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